the start so far is amazing, I wasn't expecting it to end so quickly, but I can't wait to see how it goes in the future, and I hope we get to customize our character's more unnatural traits and perhaps get reactions from the romance options to them, but I do understand that might be hard to code. otherwise, I think this is great and has amazing potential, and wish you the best going forward
I normally don't comment on these, especially for this reason but I wanted to just share this because it looks like you might have written it with a migraine. Or drunk. No offense, I'm interested in your story and I hope you find this helpful and not nitpicky.
No, it’s okay. I just type faster than I think sometimes so typos happen a lot. It’s always harder to catch your own typos when your brain fills it in for you. And the release of this prologue specifically was a bit rushed. So thank you for pointing them out so I can fix them. I plan on having someone look them over for me for my future chapters so they’ll have more revisions.
I completely get it. I don't mind so much, I just thought it might be helpful. Going through to look for and correct typos can cause you to lose your momentum. I look forward to your future updates, typos and all!
Really looking forward to more of this! A back/undo button would be super useful though, for cases where you click the wrong option. It's not super high stakes in the state the IF is in now, but as the story gets longer, it would be good to have.
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Will the revised version be uploaded any time soon?
Any updates on this one?
Is this still being worked on?
the start so far is amazing, I wasn't expecting it to end so quickly, but I can't wait to see how it goes in the future, and I hope we get to customize our character's more unnatural traits and perhaps get reactions from the romance options to them, but I do understand that might be hard to code. otherwise, I think this is great and has amazing potential, and wish you the best going forward
Love it so far!
No, it’s okay. I just type faster than I think sometimes so typos happen a lot. It’s always harder to catch your own typos when your brain fills it in for you. And the release of this prologue specifically was a bit rushed. So thank you for pointing them out so I can fix them. I plan on having someone look them over for me for my future chapters so they’ll have more revisions.
I completely get it. I don't mind so much, I just thought it might be helpful. Going through to look for and correct typos can cause you to lose your momentum. I look forward to your future updates, typos and all!
just putting the poly options here (you can find it on their Tumblr page)
Even for a short demo it had my interest. Looking forward to further content.
Really looking forward to more of this! A back/undo button would be super useful though, for cases where you click the wrong option. It's not super high stakes in the state the IF is in now, but as the story gets longer, it would be good to have.
Love it!! Cant wait for more, author!!!